You’re very close—but a few small mistakes will make you sound less confident than you actually are. I won’t change your style, just fix what would hurt your impression.
Here’s your same script, cleaned up but still natural:
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🎤 Your Final Version (keep this)
Good afternoon everyone.
I’m Sharmin Sultana, and my ID is 3037.
Today I will be talking about why people hate paying taxes.
I want to begin with an honest statement—people don’t actually hate taxes… they hate what they think happe